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This page needs editing. It has spelling, grammar, style, and formatting mistakes. There are broken links (which are also irrelevant as well; it seems unfitting to put Naruto Uzumaki in when you can put Son Goku or Akira Toriyama). Only problem is that it is locked to prevent editing. Just pointing this stuff out. Goku SS3Shakuran13Tapion with bladeThisDragonFistGokuHirudegarnMovie13endsKonatsian wizard with effectsNOW!SS3Rush 19:44, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I noticed the irrelevant link a while ago, seemed kind of peculiar to me. For the sake of consistency, this should probably be fixed. NobleTrigon was here! Send error report? 21:28, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, get an admin in here. Goku SS3Shakuran13Tapion with bladeThisDragonFistGokuHirudegarnMovie13endsKonatsian wizard with effectsNOW!SS3Rush 21:46, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

The broken links are permanent Wikia project links that may be filled in at a later date. -- SSJ4 Goku(2) 10X.Ka.me.ha.me.ha.....talk.....contrib. 22:23, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Meaning? And what about the grammar/spelling errors? Goku SS3Shakuran13Tapion with bladeThisDragonFistGokuHirudegarnMovie13endsKonatsian wizard with effectsNOW!SS3Rush 22:25, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Please note here any spelling or grammar errors that you find. Just saying that they exist is not very helpful without specifics, which are fixable if pointed out. -- SSJ4 Goku(2) 10X.Ka.me.ha.me.ha.....talk.....contrib. 01:34, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Under "use the edit summary", "Summaries" and "Recent Changes" should not be capitalized.

The editing page looks different now, so the "minor edit" info should be updated to say " try to remember to check the "Minor edit" box above the Summary box before saving the page.

Under "Link Once", using "ok" seems unprofessional. Just say "okay" or "fine". Saying "going with" is a little weirdly put, but "english" should be capitalized.

Under "don't use conversational style", it should say "derivatives". Also, shouldn't it say "Talk page"?

Under "Stubs", it should say "way too small", and the part in the parentheses should not start with a capital A. I don't know what "Ah yes, niecly put, everyone" is there for, but it should be "nicely".

Under "Do sign your Talk posts", I think it should be "you can also sign it". "Benifits" should say "Benefits". The last sentence doesn't need to be in parentheses, as it is a sentence on its own. It should say "Anonymous" users, because not everyone will know what "Anon" means. And finally, it's spelled "generally" with two Ls. Goku SS3Shakuran13Tapion with bladeThisDragonFistGokuHirudegarnMovie13endsKonatsian wizard with effectsNOW!SS3Rush 01:55, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

They are capitalized for emphasis. Minor edit is still at the bottom for 1 of the 2 skins. I changed ok to okay, and english to English. I changed derivitives to derivatives. As with minor edits, discussion is used by one of the two skins. I made some changes in the Stubs section, and the "neicely put" nonsense was leftover from a vandal that messed up some rarely used functions a little while ago. I fixed it now in any case. For talk posts, could also is fine, since it's conditional. Benifits was changed to benefits. The parentheses denote that the sentence may not merit stating without the preceding sentence, but that it has a grammatical structure requiring more formatting than an aside, but it did need a period so I added that. The other things in that sentence were fixed too. -- SSJ4 Goku(2) 10X.Ka.me.ha.me.ha.....talk.....contrib. 03:28, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, but should the page not reflect the more widely used skin? Goku SS3Shakuran13Tapion with bladeThisDragonFistGokuHirudegarnMovie13endsKonatsian wizard with effectsNOW!SS3Rush 23:23, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

The semantics of above/below aren't really that important. Also, maybe, there's no way to tell which skin is more widely used. -- SSJ4 Goku(2) 10X.Ka.me.ha.me.ha.....talk.....contrib. 00:56, June 12, 2012 (UTC)